My Teacup Broke

[Tiki-Torch]

Here's a fun little poem I wrote not that long ago. Heh, good luck understanding it.

"My Teacup Broke"

Beware the raspberries,
My teacup broke,
I threw a wrench,
So the monkey spoke;
The street fell off,
And the mouse fell out,
The soap got eaten,
By the sauerkraut;
The cheese laughed,
When the children cried,
We sat all night,
As the orange died;
The sun waved 'hello,'
My candy was sour,
The false teeth,
Stole a car for an hour;
Sometimes the trees,
They fall up there,
A spoon went sailing,
Then danced to the chair;
A snail coughed,
Then it all fell apart,
A pig flew by,
Into a mini-mart;
The floor sang,
The ceiling cried,
All because,
My shoelace lied;
The peaches ran,
A small three steps,
The lion was killed,
By two small leps;
A moon sank low,
Four pianos jumped,
A whale flew past,
And then they thumped;
Boom, bang, bing,
My ankle saw the tune,
A fork and knife,
Beat up a spoon;
The eggs didn't mind,
The chesse was rotten,
Then a monkey ran,
And was gotten;
By the Christmas lettuce,
A carrot ran over,
The pineapple cried,
To a lamb named 'Rover,'
Something went wrong,
This isn't a joke,
I was serious when I said,
'My teacup broke.'

[blondie91]

Wow, that was intriguing. I certainly liked it, seeing as how it was very good.

[Tiki-Torch]

Thanks!

[Mira]

I hope it wasn't intended to be taken too seriously, b/c I thought it was a little amusing. Mood aside, I thought it was well written. I love the unusual descriptions you used. Cool poem--I liked it!

[jupiterlightning]

Say, that was pretty good

[Tiki-Torch]

Heh, thanks everyone. Don't worry, it was not meant to be serious at all.

[Forest Girl Kaz]

That was kind of random but interesting and a little funny. I like the rhyming in it.