Red Phoenix

[jupiterlightning]

Red Phoenix

How can something be so majestic?
How can something be so mighty?
I saw that firey bird flying by
I watched it soar through the sky

I couldn't believe that I had seen such beauty,
such grace
In front of my blueish green eyes

What was that creature?
It wasn't your average bird
Maybe it was something from a fairytale,
but my friend told me that was absurd

I guess I'm the only one who can see it,
and every single day I gaze up at the sky,
and watch that red phoenix fly by.


A poem I wrote a couple of months ago. It's probably one of my favorite ones that I've written so far.

[blondie91]

And I've read that poem before when you first wrote it, and I must say that after reading it again I still like it. ^.^

[Tiki-Torch]

Heh, I like it. It has a nice rhyming scheme.

[jupiterlightning]

Thanks!

[Mira]

I like the kind of "believers will see" theme that you have going in this poem. The rhyme scheme is good as well. Nice work!

[jupiterlightning]

Thank you ^^